Friday, March 11, 2016

Blog 13-Alternative Ending

 Jonas found the strength to move on because and quote from the book page 164 "Jonas felt more and more certain that the destination lay ahead of him, very near now in the night that was approaching"-unquote, he felt it... so he kept going. He went so far... that he didn't want to give up now.
 The Brief encounter that he had with sunshine made him and Gabe Warmer which gave him the warmth during the cold to keep moving.
Jonas was so certain because of the memories that he had. (That is it...)


Hello... here is my Alternative Ending


Behind him, across vast distances of space and time from the place he had left he thought he heard music too. But perhaps it was only an echo...
Ending 1:
As the downhill ended he carried Gabe with the last bit of strength he had. As he approached the door he tried to knock... 1 knock, 2 knock, then he fell back first. He was on the verge of death with Gabe still freezing and hungry... no hungry wasn't the word he said to himself. He feels what I am now, starving. A human figure opened the door and yelled a shriek. This was a woman. Jonas then woke up in a couch, with blankets on him, and soup on his lap. He looked around and saw what he saw something different than the what memory looked like... it was... somewhat empty. He saw as was the house that he knocked on. Their appeared to be a Woman, a Man, and two children. A family unit, thought Jonas.
"GABE!" He yelled, he remembered that he had to care for Gabriel.
"The Child? He is here..." the woman gave Jonas Gabe, covered and wrapped in a blanket.
"Are you okay mister?" Asked the child that seemed the youngest... the girl looked at him with eyes of pity or sorry.
"Uh... Yes. Thank You, I am sorry for being and interrupting this! I am sorry, please forgiv-"
"You don't have to apologize, you didn't do anything wrong. You saved your 'Gabe'. My name is Margret." Jonas then knew what she was... she was the "Mother".
"I'm Noah, we have to ask you if your okay. Where are you from?" The father... thought Jonas.
"I'm Felisha" said the Older girl.
"I'm Shaquisha," said the little one.
"I'm Jonas." Jonas lifted himself up and grabbed soup and fed Gabe. The mother started to cry.
"Sorry if I had made you sad... please forgive me."
"No... it's not that... but you look so much like our son... if we still had him."
"It's okay mister!" Said the little one.
"When we had our baby boy we were happy. We watched you grow.... then, when you turned 5 some people came and took him away from us and we never saw them again. But it wasn't just our child they took, they also took from everyone in this village." Said Noah.
"Our child... he had a birth mark... on the right of his neck..." Margret started to cry again. I have weird mark on my nec... wait a minute.
"Mother? Father?" Jonas started to feel so many emotions now... like confusion and curiosity. He showed them the mark and his neck... the parents burst to tears saying how much they missed him. Jonas was confused even more again... until the Older sister that appears to be the same age as him showed him her a doll.
"This was mine... my Big Brother gave it to me when we were little.."
His mind had flashes... he remembered that this was his true family, he remembered that this was his village... his family. He grabbed Gabe, placed him on the couch as Gabe fell asleep, Jonas hugged his family, cried, and felt something that was true... He felt Love. Meanwhile back in the community... the people were getting ready for the ceremony. The Giver opened the doors and spoke the truth to the people.
"You are all brainwashed by this person", he pointed at the chief Elder in rage "That person is the cause for all of this, their used to be music, and color!"
"What's color... what music?" People started asking.
"This 'Giver' lost it... He's a crazy man!"
"You know what you DID! Then The Giver Ran up to the Chief elder... who snapped her fingers and security guards came and took the giver to the room... but not just any room... the Release room.
"This feels familiar... oh yeah I remember... don't you?" Said the Elder in a mischievous tone. The Giver's Eye's Opened in fear... and anger for he knew what she meant.
"I... Killed... Rosemary." Said the Elder.
"No... she... she injected herself!"
"With my order... my hypnotic order..."
"You... you...yo..." The Giver's Voice was Cut off. He was released. He was dead, but most importantly, he was Murdered. The Giver saw with his second of life... a memory of Rosemary... the giver transmitted all the memories to the Elder all at once... after doing so... he died, his last minute of death. He used his time to transmit the memories from him to the Elder.
"AAAAAHHHH!" The Elder shrieked, and screamed.
The Giver's last breath..."Have these memories."
The Giver had giving the Elder all of the terrible memories.
"HELP ME! HELP ME! HELP ME!NO!NO!NO!PLEASE HAVE MERCY! HAVE MERCY! HAVE MERCY ON MY SOUL" was yelled by the Elder... her justice was served. The Giver was walking, with Rosemary talking where it truly was... Elsewhere. 






Option 2, this Ghost VIllage!
Behind him, across vast distances of space and time from the place he had left he thought he heard music too. But perhaps it was only an echo...


Jonas kept going and trailed off with the urge of keeping Gabriel warm.
"Hello?" Asked Jonas with a Bashful tone,
"Pepo!!!" (Pee-po) said Jonas in a petrified feeling.
Then Jonas Felt a nudge in his hair, he felt something stroke his hair, smoothly, calmly, it was eerie. Jonas looked at Gabe and thought, wait a minute... If Jona's Arms are here... then who is touching my hair.
"He's a human!" Said a voice, it was a teen! Jonas exclaimed. he turned to his left and he felt the voice vibrations... a laughter.
"Hehehe... he's scared!" This was a girl!  Jonas then squinted and saw nothing. Then he heard another voice!
"Seeing isn't believing." Said a old voice, Jonas then had a memory of something... ghost. In his memories they were pranks... but this felt more real... like a reality t.v show he thought. Then he remembered a reality t.v show Maybe this is a reality t.v show... maybe... I'm in that one reality t.v show. I'm In "Keeping up with the Kardashians!" Yeah! I'm in that show!
"Are you guys the Kardashians!?" Said Jonas cheerfully and full of expectation and hope of him being in the show.
"I'm the Ghost of Time Past" Said the little girl still giggling.
"I'm the ghost of Time Present" said the teenager ghost who was also a female, which man... isn't she pretty.
"I'm the ghost of Time Future... and no... we are not from that one movie with Jim Carrey. And no, we will not haunt you, and no, the chicken was first, the chicken was created, then the egg was brought up after."Said the old grandma with that wisdom like voice.
 "I'm Jonas," this is Gabe, "where are you people... I can't see you."
"You must believe in us..." said the Ghost of Future. Then Jonas blinked, and believed. Then He saw Gabe disappeared from his arms and chest. He could now see the ghost.
"Where's Gabe?" Jonas said... no... yelled... in a demanding but frightened tone.
"We killed him... that is the price of seeing us" said the Teen, then ghost of Past, Present, and Future laughed. 
"NO! GIVE HIM BACK!"
"Hehehe, were kiding you human! He's here... in this crib. You are not allowed to touch the crib or him." Said Past. Dying of laughter.
"Why not?! He's mine! Not yours!"
"If you do... then he will die. This Child disappeared from you... because he isn't allowed to see us ghost. If He does then the worst prophesied will happen. He Will become the demon. We will fear the beast with just one eye."
"Okay, I want him back!"
"Then you must get the items. We will teach you magic of time." Said Future.
3 years passed, the year is 1980. One 1 year away from the day that will spark the evil. Jonas went from different time periods to do some things. The items were actually tasks. He had to make himself look like a photographer to make sure that Mabel will get her hair stuck on gum, himself to look like a teacher to make sure that Dipper didn't get any valentines. Made Sure that The Mystery Twins would go to Gravity Falls. And Why? Because the ghosts were none other than demons. Jonas didn't know. All of the events of gravity falls happened. Gabe was made into a demon by the ghost which became none other than Bill. The Demon with Just One Eye. When Jonas knew about it, he and Bill (Demon version of Gabe) battled, ending up going millions of years back in time, Jonas then taught the people how to seal bill away, and in doing so he used the generations of Dipper, Mabel, and everyone from the Bill Cipher Wheel, all the trap Bill. Jonas then decided that it would be better to go back in time to undo everything so he went to see what happened back in the community. The People rioted, their was destruction every where it was the apocalypse! He then went back in time to see everything, if Jonas never left, then he would've still been alive. Which meant that Gabe Would die. Which means that if Gabe was dead then that would make the people know about what happened. Then the people would go to the giver and stop him before he did anything to himself, but no... the giver died. Every one then targeted back their anger and confusion on the Chief Elder, who which died of stress. With no leader people would die, then without the chief Elder the weather blockings were unlocked. The Chief elder's life was the lock to no weather, it was January. The Cold of the outside and the heat from inside made a tornado, which then followed more natural disasters. Jonas couldn't undo what he had done. So he ended up not doing anything at all.
The End... or is it?



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